[Foundation-l] New draft of privacy policy (urgent)

Mon Jun 23 21:58:12 UTC 2008

Nathan writes:

>
> * Consistent terminology: Projects are variously referred to as  
> projects,
> wikis, WMprojects, WMProjects, Wikiprojects, etc.

This is an entirely fair criticism, in my view.

> * Editing for length: I think there are a number of paragraphs that  
> could be
> condensed without losing readability or meaning. I've done a bit of  
> that,
> most especially in the first half. Might not be able to save a huge  
> amount
> of text this way, but there are definitely opportunities.

Thanks! I was hoping someone might tackle this.

> If you want, this version can be copied into the other draft version  
> as a
> revision (and then reverted) so that the differences can be easily  
> seen.

I think this is a fine idea -- just make sure you're the one who does  
both the substitution and the reversion, so that it's clear to anyone  
who's reviewing the history that you're doing this for diff purposes.

--Mike