[Wikipedia-l] Header donation solicitation is a good ideaforfundraising drive
Alex R.
alex756 at nyc.rr.com
Mon Oct 6 19:56:59 UTC 2003
From: "Erik Moeller" <erik_moeller at gmx.de>
> It does say "Donations" now. The other text is "We are trying to make
> Wikipedia faster and more responsive. You can help by making a donation."
> I hope this satisfies your concerns.
"We are trying to make Wikipedia faster and more responsive. "
That is fine.
The second sentence concerns me a bit. Here are some suggested
changes:
"Information about [donation]s. "
"Find out about making [donation]s.
[Donation] information.
How about that? "You can help by making a donation" might
be construed as a bit of a solicitation, no?
Alex756
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