On Sun, 27 Apr 2003, tarquin wrote:
Daniel Ehrenberg wrote:
Some articles have many one-sentence paragraphs
and it
is very annoying.
Good style is hard to define in simple terms.
But paragraphs of a single sentence often read badly.
They sound stilted.
But it's one of those things where you just have to use your judgement
as a writer. Sometimes a single sentence paragraph is good, sometimes not.
And sometimes you stumble across an entry that makes you wonder how it
slipped beneath the radar for so long.
I direct the curious to [[Amanda Pays]], & to study the history of that
article. Boy, did it need some cleaning up.
And for the record, years ago I did have a crush on Ms Pays. And I still
haven't made my peace with Corbin Bernsen.
Geoff