On Fri, 9 Jun 2006 11:08:20 +0200, you wrote:
I don't have a problem with "Real vehicles are
allocated..." when we
have already made clear that the system is "possible". We describe how
things *do* work in the fictional system. This does not seem very
different to me than saying "Under the proposed foobar download
management system, users are charged for each download..."
Sure, some of the text is OK. Some is not. For example, the first
para of the overview stated that it was a system serving a wide area,
but not one of the pilots (including the two in build) does this -
they all serve a small number of destinations from a possibly larger
number of embarkation points.
Guy (JzG)
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