These have now been scheduled. I'm going to stick without the "only" for
the rugby Facebook post if only because it's supposed to read like a
definitive list (because it is), and "only" is kind of redundant for that.
Thanks for the suggestions though!!
Joe
On 23 September 2015 at 03:02, James Alexander <jalexander(a)wikimedia.org>
wrote:
Thanks Joe, thoughts inline
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On Tue, Sep 22, 2015 at 5:54 PM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland(a)wikimedia.org
wrote:
Hey all,
We today published "News on Wikipedia: Japan shocks the rugby world, an
earthquake strikes Chile, and more" to the Wikimedia blog. URL:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/09/22/japan-rugby-chile-earthquake/
We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread through
the rest of the week to keep things timely.
Please do comment for tone.
*Twitter:*
• Greece just had their second general election in nine months.
#NewsOnWikipedia
hmm, this works but I wonder about a bit more of an active voice? (I think
I'm using that phrase correctly...) such as:
"Greece finishes their second general election in nine months.
#NewsOnWikipedia" think it flows better then "just had"
• Japan's military now has powers it
hasn't had since World War II.
#NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM, other thoughts:
- Japan interprets it's constitution to allow it to enter foreign
conflicts to attack in self-defense. #NewsOnWikipedia
- Japan's military gains powers it hasn't had since World War II.
#NewsOnWikipedia
• A magnitude 8.3 earthquake struck off the coast of Chile last week.
#NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
• Burkina Faso experienced its second major
political uprising in two
years. #NewsOnWikipedia
Perhaps experiences? (rather then experienced) LGTM with either
• Japan won its first Rugby World Cup game since
1991... against the
Springboks. #NewsOnWikipedia
Springboks is such a great word... how can you NOT want to figure out
what the
hell that is when you read it... [/me had to google before
responding]
*Facebook/G+:*
• Greece just held its third national vote of the year... #NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM, same slight comment as above.
• Japan has promoted legislation allowing it to
fight in foreign
conflicts for the first time since World War II. #NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
• An earthquake off the coast of Chile was felt
in São Paulo — more than
1,600 miles away. #NewsOnWikipedia
LGTM
• Last year, a populist movement overthrew the President of Burkina Faso.
> Last week, the new President was overthrown in a coup d'état.
#NewsOnWikipedia
Like this, LGTM
• Teams South Africa has lost to in a Rugby World
Cup: England, New
Zealand, Australia ... and now Japan. #NewsOnWikipedia
Are these the only teams they've ever lost too? Perhaps adding Only
somewhere? "The only teams South Africa has lost to during a Rugby World
Cup: ...."
best,
> Joe
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