Great! As someone living in an area with very little Internet availability, I love to see the issue taken seriously.
One point that's entirely missing from the declaration is the possibility of contributing back to the information commons from areas without connectivity. I don't fault the authors, as it seems they were library-centric and face a different set of problems than Wikimedians, but we should rise to the challenge, and help craft a bill of rights for citizens of the world to participate fully, write blogs and wiki articles, send emails, reply to comment threads, and upload media, all with intermittent Internet access.
Regards,
Adam