Looks good! I did one byte's worth of copyediting—but forgot to log in so
you'll never prove it was me!
One question about this claim:
That's roughly an increase of 300,000 to 1.3
million additional page views
a day into our projects!
I read that to claim that people using the portal would not view those
pages anyway. Would it be more accurate to say something like,
"...additional page views a day from the portal into our projects!" or some
such?
It's always cool to reflect on how a few percentage points increase in
performance can affect hundreds of thousands or even millions of people!
Trey Jones
Software Engineer, Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation
On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 7:06 PM, Deborah Tankersley <
dtankersley(a)wikimedia.org> wrote:
Thanks Chris!
I added some info back in - I thought telling a story about why we did the
testing and what we'll be going forward with was important. I know with
these additions, I made it a little word-ier, but hopefully the blog and
community folks will like it too. :)
Here's my edits
<https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1&diff=15334156&oldid=15334048>
.
Cheers,
Deb
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Deb Tankersley
Product Manager, Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation
On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM, Chris Koerner <ckoerner(a)wikimedia.org>
wrote:
After some feedback from the blog folks I have an
updated draft to share.
Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger
story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well
(not the other way around!).
I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big
news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs.
https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1
Here's a diff
<https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACKoerner_%28WMF%29%2FWork%2FA-B_Test_Results_1&type=revision&diff=15333867&oldid=15327844>
of my slew of changes.
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Yours,
Chris Koerner
Community Liaison - Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation
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